I like it.
I like all the parts you 'changed' on it.
I wish you had changed more though...the rear part is great but imo the front part still is a bit too recognizably conventional-graflex for a steampunk saber...I'd suggest something other than a bubble strip, perhaps a brass plate with more clock gears attached , and maybe some kind of antiqued brass lamp knob or such in place of either the graflex button or glass eye, might help complete the Steampunk look.
But as is it still looks great...well done!